one-way crush

this isn't a real valid poem, but it's my first written outside of a school assignment. it's called: One-Way Crush. and I wrote it because I have a crush on this one guy, but the promises I made to myself before keep me from even starting a conversation with him. I'm just hoping it's just a phase - a Korean "jjak-sarang".
Here it is:

one-way crush
written: 8.23.02
by: me

getting hooked by your look
gazing secretly from the left
hoping the class would never end
wishing you'd talk to me
waiting for someone to crack a joke
hoping you would turn and smile
mattering never to whom or what
seeing you happy is all I want
pondering if they were petty tries
feeling anxious when you tried to say HI
apologizing now: sorry I always cut our breaks short
taking a small step is what I'm afraid of
regretting now: we could've become best of friends
finding myself attracted to you
dreaming how it could have been, even as a friend of yours
thinking now: but only stupid memories, doubts, and worries ascend
defending now: no, it's not you, these just haunt days on end

question. will I go the wrong path if I say HI?
just remembered my Nile long priorities
now I'm hoping this is just an empty phase
last day is approaching
question. will I ever see you again?
ym says relationships are a two-way thing
find myself repelling in a helpless rush
writing this and ending this one-way crush.

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nice poem

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one-way crush.....
awwwww..............

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awww.... that's cute... nice poem too... i don't write poems except for school assignments... for one thing my english teacher had spent way too much time on them.

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this really should be in the creative writing forum....

but either way it's a really nice poem :thumbup:

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Creative writing or Literature I think, nice poem tho

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aww..nice poem..it kinda describes how i feel too... :sad:

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:thumbup: nice poem

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wait... I've thought about the title of this poem... I realized it after discussing redundancy with some people. One-Way Crush. Isn't that redundant? Or is it valid, as in - smelly fart, lonely hermit, a teacher teaches, etc...? I don't know... I guess I just titled it that because of the last couple of lines of the poem. Oh well.
By the way, I got over him - good thing I didn't confess to him when I was crushing him.

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