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MaGiKToToRo
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Unhappy My Life.....

I admired you from afar

Being where you always are

But a thought ran across my mind

I knew you could never be mine



Even still I watched you smile

My heart turning cold and defiled

But when I saw your crystal eyes

It was then I realized



I’d love you forever until I die

This I’m telling you is not a lie

So I watched you now with wonder and passion

Walking slowly in a heavenly fashion



For many nights I’ve cried to sleep

Knowing your heart I couldn’t keep

But it was then I finally knew

I’d give my life to be with you

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wahh.. that's really niceee!

i can really feel it ^^* noe wut u mean too =/

that's really sweet!!-- yet sad.

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MaGiKToToRo
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Thanx for reading

: ) Glad that u liked it....... yeah, i was pretty sad when i wrote it....

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Chinesegrl
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aww i know what you mean.. that was really good ^o^ keep writin for us to read ^o^

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MaGiKToToRo
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: )

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Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."


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AZN Pinoy BOI
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hehe aaron gettin da girlz wid hiz smooth poemz

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MaGiKToToRo
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ahh... i brought this thread back from the dead cause it kind of describes the way im feeling now

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Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."


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