I wrote this during Geometry to stay awake



I was thinking about the Foo Fighters song "Walking After You" when I wrote it. It sort of fits that tune if you read it right^_^;



Tonight, I wish, I want to hold you so tight
Dream through the sunrise
Could you maybe like me, if I try 'lil more
Loving you is a chore
I try to get close to you, but you're always pushin' me back
Always the same point of attack
Will the sun ever shine on me
Will it ever make you see
I never wanted you like that
Your face is pretty, but I want what's in your head
Why are you walking away
I don't think you are understanding what I say
My heart has been cracked in half
The way you treat me makes me wonder if I am daft
If you want to tell me to go
What's holding you back
I don't think I'll get it until you say so
I wish you'd stop stringing me along
You know all the words you've chosen are wrong
I love you but my patience won't last long



and that's all I could think of. I'll probably work more with it later.

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good job!

even tho you are young .. your words are really deep ..

i dont know if you need to work with it .. its already good!

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