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MoOnLigHt
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a poem (as usual)

This one actually has a happy mood.....lol

Hope:


Hoping is the best way
To go on and not to stay
Hoping is to reach your dreams
Dont give up, it's not as hard as it seems

When despair and loneliness make you fall
stand up and walk, confident and tall
The road may seem long and tough
But for now a few steps is enough

Do not rush and savor the moment
There is no time for hatred and torment
Sometimes your life may seem a little gray
it will not last forever so close your eyes and pray

So hope, for it is the best way,
Dont be afraid to fall, for you may
Just remember to stand back up and take a few steps
know that confusion is ordinary, you cannot explain life in depths

So take a few steps, move closer to your dreams
Thanks for not quitting, i told you, it was easier than it seems
one day you will be there, finally reached success
so hope, for it will be your friend and guide you through the steps

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lol... boooo go for the depressing themes...

i'm just kidding.. haha ... there's a lot more responses to your poem about "lost and found"

this poem is nice.... sounds like lyrics to a song... maybe you should start composing songs to go along with your poems... good good... lol

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Ooo... I love all your works... Damnit... I wish I could be that talented... Uhm, I hope you don't mind if I dedicate this poem to a friend... He's been feeling down lately, so I wanna dedicate it to him... of course I'll give you the credit... That is really really good though...

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MoOnLigHt
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haha.....sure u can dedicate it to ur friend..hehe i dont mind....lol......well im glad u guys like my work....lol ^^

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