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JeNyA
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just a lil poem

" WiThUoT "
Without a love the kiss is lie
Without a hug the wishes r not disire
Without a miss the feeling is not real
& without u I have nothing to deal


The sky is blue & grass is green
The sun is gold - that is u bring.
Never ever let u go
& without me u couldn`t go.


Without a love the kiss is lie
Without a love all feelings rn`t inspire
Without all feelings I can`t live
& without me u can not breath.


The sky is blue & grass is green
The sun is gold - that is u bring.
I will never make u sad
& u will never cause me bad.

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DEmeant0r
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hey that's pretty good, keep it up

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cute 'n sweet

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