haha I dont think im that good at writing, but I can't pay attention in my math class so I write my friends corny poems lol...so i'll share them with u guys even though they suck haha

~You~
When I see you my heart beats so fast~
It seems all my bad moments have past~
When you laugh, I laugh too~
And I ask myself who~
Who else can I love who is greater than you?~
lol

~Friends~
I was mad today because of a guy that I know~
But when I saw him at lunch you'd of never known~
How I love him, I hate him, hes got me confused~
I think that he likes me but maybe i'm being used~
I don't wanna think about how this will end~
So i'll TRY to stop "Crushing" and call him my friend~
lol

~Candy~
Guys are like candy they can be so sweet~
If you get one thats "sour" that wont be a treat~
If you get one thats "bitten" you'll throw it away~
If you get one thats "hot" you'll want it to stay~
If you get one thats "hard" you'll give it a lick~
If you get 2 in one sitting you'll just have to pick~
But the kind we all like are the kind that last long~
We call them "jawbreakers" and is that so wrong?~
lol that ones so corny that it makes me laugh

ok thats enough I wont bore u nemore haha!!

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lol...they're nice....why do u end all of them with "lol" ?

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lol...they're nice....why do u end all of them with "lol" ?

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hah! nooo! not corny!! the first one was just sappy!!

made me all warm and fuzzy inside! hehhee ..

the second .. wow!! .... i liked how everything came together ... cool!


and the second is SOOO CREATIVE!!!

awesome work!even if its when youre bored!

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ahahaha good stuff made me smile

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hey i read your poems and i thought they were cute. But i think if you are really in love with this person you speak of you wouldnt have a very good idea of why you do and since it seems you dont that just means that you have mixed feelings but love is something that you know you have for a person with out a doubt and if you dont really know why you love this person than its probaly mis placed feelings and nothing else or you subconciously know that this certain someone isnt good for you but you are thinking with your clit and not your brain but hey no hard fellings im just telling you the real cuz ive been there and when its over it isnt pretty... Bye Bye


Yours Truly
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hey i read your poems and i thought they were cute. But i think if you are really in love with this person you speak of you wouldnt have a very good idea of why you do and since it seems you dont that just means that you have mixed feelings but love is something that you know you have for a person with out a doubt and if you dont really know why you love this person than its probaly mis placed feelings and nothing else or you subconciously know that this certain someone isnt good for you but you are thinking with your clit and not your brain but hey no hard fellings im just telling you the real cuz ive been there and when its over it isnt pretty... Bye Bye


Yours Truly
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