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tea
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my new song: without you

[LOW]

[HIGH]

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The song was made cuz we each felt a pain within us. So basically, we wrote about what happened in our lives and what we did to forget about them.



lyrics:

[CHORUS]
20 years past yo this is my life
with my broken wings, i learned to take flight
dry the tears that I cry deep inside
keep elevatin cause the limit is the sky


[JOON]
i was brought in this world by an individual
then a pitiful exit when my life was critical
some might be cynical that i wouldnt make it far
but i fought the battle i fought my lone war

at the pinnacle of time, when life has just begun
open the closed doors as she dares to return
when my past life meant nothing to you
fifteen years gone by with a destroyed youth

walk a mile in my shoes and you'll soon realize
take a journey through my eyes, my soul will open wide
let down my pride without you by my side
it'll soon subside when I hide my longing cries

a life without you .....
i cried i suffered i died without you ..
gotta be strong and figure a route through ..
in a lost life without you


[CHORUS]


[TONY]
six months gone by, i cant live the past,
i try to stay behind, but life is too fast
thoughts of losing you never came to mind
never thought that you would leave me behind
with you, the sun shined bright
all my sorrows would disappear out of sight
but without you, my tears rained down
i starting living my life with a hidden frown

where are you? you know that i need you
i miss you, please come to my rescue
wait...your love i overgrew
i hope that you knew... that i loved you too
now i live my life day by day
ever since the night we went our seperate ways
i want you to know my love never swayed
but i still cant believe that you passed away


[CHORUS]


PAUL
Another day crawls by, another breath dies
Unsuccessfully trying to find the lost times
I loved you so, and sometimes you loved me too
It doesnt matter, my faithful love could not keep you

Merciless memories continue to plague my mind
To search for emotions i cant seem to find
Always just shy of an understanding
Always the same ending, always the lone man standing

I burn each thought along with a cigarette
There might be yet an end to this mental threat
What i wanted. To love you and hold you close to me
What i learned. Being with me hurts you painfully

What i wanted. To be the reason why you smile
What i learned. You wouldnt stay, not even for a while
What i wanted. To be safe in the love of your trust
What i learned. That my true love just wasnt enough

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7 views no replies? what gives

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woah that was real nice, u all sounded real good and the beat was hot .. nice work

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yo tony man. that was hott. im sorry i didnt reply earlier. this song is hott, and deep, very deep. hott beat. ppl are missing out by not listening to this.

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J-DraGoNz
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moved to Lyricism.

AH i love this beat. i forgot who its by...Nastee, Fobanese and Raskal did this beat right in "Feelins" haha but anyway

songs dope.

first guy came sick, nice flow and delivery.

tony, improved alot since da last track. had a nice rhyme scheme, nice flow.

third guy was coo, i like his flow. this one part didnt seem to flow right, but its all good. came tight like everyone else.

i was feelin da first guy da most, but all cats came tight.

hook was nice, im feelin this shit. good stuff.

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thanks josh..im trying =P

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this songs pretty deep..really nice

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wow, i like it.
deep stuff.

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dj EndEver
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dayam yo, thazz a phat azz beat u got there, n let me comment on tha lyrics, man those words realli hit hard, cuz i have similar experiences. tha song could also be called Reminisce, cuz thats wutz this song makes u do.

ne waiz, phat song. u make tha beats urself?

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yea...songs tight. they didnt make that beat...its by uh...i forgot who it was, but its a net beat. i like that beat too

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sik man! lyrics were ill, beat was mad, voices were clear....sum it up...it was hella good!!

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quote:
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ppl are missing out by not listening to this.

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wow talk about bringing back the dead LOL

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seriously...all u fuckers sleep on my song LOL bastards

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its ok josh, i still love you....r talent

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that's a great song :D i feel it it hits me right here good job

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OMG!...cool and meaningful words, lub the beat!

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i hate you tony. everybody loves your songs. LOL. this is the only post lyricism ever gets. anyway i still love this song. def relate to the lyrics.

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haha this shit is old i decided to check out jsl again last night..and i see my thread. man these newbies reviving old threads

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haha werd. but its still a good song =P how you been tony?

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