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//ViRTUOSO//
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Harlem, Harlem, Harlem...

Damn...It's so easy to pick on this softie... And to go with being so damn soft, my friend...I'm gonna try my hand at poetry. Just for you, Harlem Heat:

Harlem, what can I say?/
Your raps are fucking gay.../
Your raps are too gramatically challenged and don't make sense/ you try to rap like your a white 50 cent.../
But you'n me go way back, you all see.../
Back when Big Harlem was still just a little wanna-be./
This story takes place long ago, and it's just still too damn sad/ the day you went mad.../
because I still remember that winter night.../
You banged that bitch, that I must admit was quite hot at first sight./
You asked her to come home with you, you know.../
that place under the bridge, removed that bottle of brandy from the fridge./
After two bottles later, she took her pants off without a care/
and I was quick to realize from the closet: this bitch was covered in hair!/
Hell, anything to you with two legs is fair/
And even though I understand you craved some nookie/
it's just too damn bad you slept with a wookie/
I recorded and made copies/
and the day after me and your friends made fun of you, showed the video and sold the DVD's, laughed and went hehehe/
you played hookie because of the indescrepable itch on your wee-wee./
Now, six months later, you lay burried in the ground.../
It's still sad because I will still say to this day: You were as ugly as a hound./
And all you ever wanted to do was get laid.../
it's just too sad you died from herpes, by a bitch you paid./

And I only stopped by to say Hi, because now I'm doing time for selling those DVD's/
who knew your punk ass was only 17?/
It's been a dream/
and this is only part 1 of my evil scheme./

Hit me back, mother fucker...
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Haha. I'm new, but I don't give a fuck... I was bored. Not bad for my first post... You can say I'm calling you out, but honestly...I wasn't even trying. Let's see what you got.

I didn't feel like stretching this shit out, putting a "/" after every bar... This just came off the top of my head, but oh well. Edited just for all ya'll. Peace ~

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that was better than anything harlem could spit but dont write it in paragraph form cause its annoying to read cause i cant tell where your trying to rhyme

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that was better than anything harlem could spit but dont write it in paragraph form cause its annoying to read cause i cant tell where your trying to rhyme


word yo, better then harlem... cut it up though, makes it less annoying for da reader, looks better too

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he fixed it

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it wasn't baddd... but it wasn't anything special

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Sorta curious if the little idiot is gonna respond.

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pretty good.......

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i used to live in the city, never actually been to harlem though. it could be a little better, but nice job anyway.

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harlem isnt from ny hes from ohio lol

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Fucker...

Mother fucker, you little faggot/
I’ve had it, Bitch/
I’ve given you 4 days to respond/
But that’s okay, your bitch ass was probably getting busy with your Mom/
Talking about Virt put you away and got hit/
And how you can’t even begin to spray your lyrical bull shit/
And your Mommy just said “Don’t worry honey, Virt is gay and he’s just a big bully anyway”/
Well, Mommy’s right, son/
‘Cept I’m not gay/
Just here to tell you, bitch/
I’m here to stay/
And put your bull shit away/
And you can’t even respond?/
Can’t afford to give your two cents away?/
Cuz your so poor and need to pull your pussy raps out of lay away./
Just fade away bitch, it’ll be alright/
C’mon Bitch, just say you give up without a fight/
And admit defeat/
So stop beatin’ your meat to your gay porno mags/
And post some kind of reply, pussy/
So we all know you’z ain’t a dead wanksta/
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I'm done playing games, I want this bitch to respond. It took me 5 minutes to type this rap out, so it's a little rushed...but I think get my message across.

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your lying about the responding time. im an admin on this site and it says that it took 27 minutes to write that.

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your lying about the responding time. im an admin on this site and it says that it took 27 minutes to write that.


First of all, I didn't know an admin could do that.

Secondly, I had to do a few things before I sat down to my computer again. I don't know if you can log what I type, too, but I know I had this window open for awhile before I started to type, it didn't take me twenty seven minutes to type this last rhyme out. Plus I read through it once, checking if I made any typo's. I can assure you it didn't take me that long to respond.

Whatever. Next time I'll explain things better, sorry.

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First of all, I didn't know an admin could do that.

Secondly, I had to do a few things before I sat down to my computer again. I don't know if you can log what I type, too, but I know I had this window open for awhile before I started to type, it didn't take me twenty seven minutes to type this last rhyme out. Plus I read through it once, checking if I made any typo's. I can assure you it didn't take me that long to respond.

Whatever. Next time I'll explain things better, sorry.



he's BSin u... he ain't an admin... nice spit though

doesn't matter how long he was in here... he never said it was a keystyle doesn't matter if u were in tehre for 3 mins. or an hour, still his lyrics making him able to but it in lyrics

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he's BSin u... he ain't an admin... nice spit though


He had a nice guess, then. I know I had the window open, but personally, I thought it had been longer then twenty seven minutes. O'well.

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lol i was just messin with u cause i wanted to see what you would say.

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lol i was just messin with u cause i wanted to see what you would say.


hahahahaha

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you called him the equivelent of a little bitch 14 times lol

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Damn...

Holy shit...this pussy still hasn't replied...

Damn. Somebody tell this little ho to get on his piece of shit computer and say something...damn, what a dumbass...

Probably beating off to all his Shaq posters in his room...

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lol....or mayb he jus gettin his friends to write one fo' him..

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lol....or mayb he jus gettin his friends to write one fo' him..


heh heh they all noobz to fa freestyle/keystyle world so wutz da point... i think he's still trying to make up a spit

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