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Chinesegrl
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poem...

my cousin wrote this i think well here it goes if i can get it in order

if you could see the tears you left in my eyes
memories you left in my mind and the pain you left in my heart
youll understand how much love does hurts

have you ever had the feelings that you wanted to talk to someone,
but couldnt cause it would be hard to say goodbye?

if you love me
love me forever
if you dont love me
love me never
but if you do love me
love me forever
all i need is to ask you a question
do you love me forever?

no matter how much you love someone..
love will always fail
since the one you love
with all your heart
ususally never loves you back.

if someone comes into your life and
becomes a part of you,
but for some reason he couldnt stay,
dont cry too much..
just be glad that your paths crossed
and somehow he made you happy
even for a while..

a sad thing in life is
when you meet someone who means a lot to you,
only to find out in the end
it was never meant to be
and you have to let go.

if kisses were water, id give you the sea
if hugs were leaves, id give you a tree
if love was time, id give you eternity

nothing is more painful
then realizing
hemeant everything to you and
you meant nothing to him

you`ll know that you miss someone very much
when everytime you think of that
person,
your heart breaks into pieces and
just a quick `hello` from that
person can bring the broken pieces back

it hurts knowing that you dont want me
but it hurts more knowing
you have no idea
how much i want you.

were there times when you cant seem to be able to say
what you want to say,
do what you want to do,
cry when you want to cry...
but smile?

some days i think i cant live without you,
and other days i wish
i never met you.

<3love is only a word,
until you find somebody that gives it meaning.<3

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im confused .. are there like little poems all together ..

or is the whole thing one poem??

cuz if its one .. then its kinda choppy ... but if they're individual .. they're really sweet!

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wow that was really nice!! I liked it a lot!

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TyGer STyLe
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good stuff

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Chinesegrl
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quote:
Originally posted by iTsmeehLita
im confused .. are there like little poems all together ..

or is the whole thing one poem??

cuz if its one .. then its kinda choppy ... but if they're individual .. they're really sweet!



i think they're all different ones because they're really sweet jus one at a time ^^ i agree wit yu ^^

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Re: poem...

wOw Jenny!!..-a-;
so gooD...>_<..how sweet..T^T..

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omg.. this is soooo sweet!

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