a quick freestyle i did check it.


So much shit to complicate//
Too many things to contemplate//
All this shit, i just cant take//
So many decisions i have to make//
I wish all of this was jus all fake//
Lord, i ask you jus please wait//
I need more time, i need today//
Jus wanna get up n get away//
Livin day to day, only the strong will survive//
All alone in dis world, no one to help me stay alive//
In Orange County we hit da blunt till we ease the pain//
Everyday nothing changes, its always all the same//
My life so poor i jus need some healthy change//

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good stuff man...

the only part that i was kinda thrown off by was

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In Orange County we hit da blunt till we ease the pain//

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man, why everyone sleepin on me yo....das hella jacked. if u dont like it, say so, dont jus look n leave...actually most of u dont even look -_- i hate u all! fo realz tho...im sad

everyone sleepin on my ghetto song n my poems n freestylez damn...and all the tourniez i set up geezzz wats wit dat ya'll hate me or somethang.

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Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
man, why everyone sleepin on me yo....das hella jacked. if u dont like it, say so, dont jus look n leave...actually most of u dont even look -_- i hate u all! fo realz tho...im sad

everyone sleepin on my ghetto song n my poems n freestylez damn...and all the tourniez i set up geezzz wats wit dat ya'll hate me or somethang.

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i dont think alotta ppl go to the creative writing and lyricsicm section .. thas why ...

we dont hate you!! .. why you get that idea??

keep posting your stuff .. dont get discouraged by the number of replies! ...

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alwayz heylla goot flows josh posh! i love u! eEe! im ur byggest fan~ puhaha!

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