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Zero-Sen
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My lil Poem

Yeah, today we had a math assessment. After i finished I decided to write a poem. Itz a bit corney.... but that is what i had after 20 minutes:



The day I met you
I couldn't forget you.
I just couldn't wait
for our first date.
As we hun out at the mall
I saw just you, that was all.
Not a movie or a show,
just your skin as white as snow.
And even today
my thoughts stray
to the day
I met you.

You're not jus my lover,
you're also my friend.
You're the one in whom I depend
I can confide in you
'cause I know you'll be true.
Nothing anybody can do
to stop me from loving you.

Perhaps there'll be a day
one our love fades away.
But you'll always stay
in my heart I pray.
I thank the good Lord for
having you, for rich or poor
I'll be with you.

Someday maybe
we can get married.
Have kids and a home
where I will write you a new poem.
But until then, I'll be in your arms
being protected from harm.
Just as long as you and I can stay true
there;s nothin we can't do.

While I write this poem, there is no girl, with white skin or whom will marry me. but someday... someday...

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its not corny at all, the girls in my school would fall in love with you after they heard that.

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Props To Huby

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micron
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wow. im impressed.

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huby40
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mmm... corny. please pass the butter.

good poem :thumbup:

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daNNy LuV 1TYM
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*tears welling up* awwww! thaz soooo sweet! *sniff* dayam i wish sum1 wud do that for me

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