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J-DraGoNz
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an old poem i wrote..."Pain"

heres a poem i wrote when i used to write some poetry. bout a year old...titled "Pain"


[edit] oh yea, i forgot to state that its REALLY bad...puhahaha[/edit]


Nothing in my life is ever true,
My friends were so few,
But now they are none,
Betrayed by each and everyone,

Each day my life gets worse and worse,
Why did God put on me this curse,
I was denied happiness and joy,
Only to be controlled by my enemies like a toy,

Why must life be this way,
I wish all this pain would fade away,
I feel like im bound in chains,
As my life continues to remain,
Lonely and in pain,

I wish i could leave this life all behind,
My life it seems will always decline,
Nothing will ever be mine,
Peace is something i will never find,
It will always be like this until the end of time,
With my fucked up mind,
All i can do is rhyme,

Worth nothing, cant do anything right,
My life fucked just overnight,
Brought down by my pain and shame,
Things will never be the same.

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wow. very well done. dun be so modest thaz realli good

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wow. very well done. dun be so modest thaz realli good



Lolz...thanks alot...but nah, it really aint dat good.

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this is your own work josh, so basically that's creative writing..i think poems from other people belong here...

moved to creative writing..

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Lolz...thanks alot...but nah, it really aint dat good.




yah~ it is that good

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