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Hyo0JeE
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Rate this Poem on a scale of 1-10

hey guys tell me if u like this poem:

A rose so pretty
A petal so elegant
A love not imaginable

Yet a thorn so sharp
A cut so deep
And a heart cut in pain

A rose may represent love, but the thorns represent its pain.


rate this poem for me from 1-10.. thx

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sangxjin
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wow...thats pretty good.


8.5!

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7..

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i give 7.5
i like the last bit

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awwww.. datz reallie goOt..
nd shO troo toO..
hMmz 8.5!! ^^

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GinaDaQueen
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VERY nice.......i totally loved it

i give it a 9

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um.. really, i think its a nice poem, REALLY
BUT
i like poems that rhyme..

so its a ... 5? cause i like it but dont like it
ack, dont hate me

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that last bit sounds like a quote

it was a 9 up until that last part..
so i give it a 8.99999999

work the last part and it'll be a ten..d=)

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in my opinion..i think it was a very deep poem..much more meaning into that poem then it would seem..in a scale i really couldn't say..but it was very excellent...if you wrote that..please continue..you have a real talent in writing..

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i can see how the things relate towards one another, there are some certain things i didnt like..but over all id give it an 8/8.5

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very deep and meaningfull. I give it a 9

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9
good stuff

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7.5 the last line kinda ruined it...pretty good though

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9

it's good.

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that poem was nice... its like.. more meaningful then it seems... and about the rose.. everyting u wrote.... iss so true.... nice i like it :thumbup:

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8.5

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pUcCa_sTaR
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9.5

iT wAs GuDe! kEkE ^ ^

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TyGer STyLe
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i like 8.75...
heh i like that sybolizm, even though you explained it haha

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i'd give it a 7.5 - 8.0

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9. thats good. i tried to write poems but i failed...horribly.

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