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J-DraGoNz - Feel Me (new shit...freestyle...kinda)
wsup, spit this track all quickstyle. "freestyle...kinda", that means i wrote it there on da spot and just spit it nah mean. didnt like take time to think and den write...so i guess thats kinda freestyle? in a way...thats how i see it anyway. oh well. doesnt matter, still what i feel. title has nothing to do with the actual message of the song....lol. Just listen. its kinda ghetto, i was experimenting with a different style.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/jdragonzmusic.htm
first one. J-DraGoNz - Feel Me
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<Lyrics>
Oh no, all this bullshit is jus happenin again//
I met this girl, and to me shes more then just a friend//
When i first saw her, I couldnt believe what my eyes were seeing//
For that moment, i thought an angel had come into being//
She is so sweet, so kind, so beautiful and fine//
All i wanted in this world was for her to be mine//
I pursued a relationship and wrote her love letters//
I knew with her in my life, everything would become better//
But she rejected me, wouldnt even give me a chance//
Just because of my age, she didnt want a romance//
So she broke my heart and now im real sick with it//
She tore my life apart and she was real quick with it//
You changed my entire life for the worse//
Dear God why have you put on me this curse//
Oh Lord, why do things just have to be this way//
Why cant everything just ever be okay//
What did i do to deserve all of this pain//
I feel as if i lived my whole life in vain//
Its insane, i dont know what to do anymore//
Nothing to look forward to, my life feeling so poor//
Now, theres nothing in my life but confusion//
She wants to be my friend, but its just an illusion//
She doesnt want me to be sad, she feels bad//
But now im here, writing this song with a pen and a pad//
I would've gave everything i had just to be with you//
I didnt have a chance, but i still tried even though i knew//
Because my feelings were true, but i guess i have to move on//
And eventually, my feelings for you will be gone//
*Note* when i say "And eventually, my feelings for you will be gone//" i dont mean ill stop caring for/liking her, but i mean that ill eventually let it go even though i still like her.
oh yea, the beat and everything is all OG.
hollaback (yea yea, i kno iz wack, but just gimme some contructive critisizm)
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Last edited by J-DraGoNz on 05-07-2003 at 02:57 AM
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05-07-2003 02:49 AM
its good 
no knock older borthers know best puahaha 
