its not really a song yet, but um one day
haven't posted in a while
tryin to elevate..very short
peep


think its time to call
i aint made out for this game
im a writer, im gonna fall
i lost my inspiration
can't find any light in my puzzling situations
maybe with some homies on ocassion
but wats it gonna lead to, blazin
forgettin the troubles n fuck what we facin
it keeps us from goin insane
cuz when you hit there only confusion remains...
a lot of happiness here is fake
hope you never need to relate
but jus understand the meanin
problems remain while we still dreamin
this war aint fought pullin 9s
this war is fought with minds
why can't we trust our own kind
all this writin jus makes me sharper
and thats a reality that ima let shine


- me

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man it was niiice dex you got soem skills man i wish i can come up with shit like that

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nice nice~ keep it up. u gettin better.

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more more more comments plz

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Uppin.

drop part 2

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thx , aite heres part 2

so lost in the land of oz
try to understand my cause
this n that the endless hate string
ive been mentally slayed without signs of pause
everyday is too much of backstabbin
im tough, but sometimes i can sadden
wats w/ all this beef i been havin
some things could be really simple
a little could fix a lot while staying literal
maybe our struggles can turn out less critical
a world beyond civil
so i jus wait for something carried out effectively
why can't yall jus start respectin me
i know i aint goin crazy
but im still clueless cuz this shits all maybe
i need time alone to wish for a new home
i need to rhyme alone to spit for the world to know

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uppin.

keep elevatin. its dope

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nice..

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