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MoOnLigHt
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Registered: Jun 2002
Location: New York
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Unhappy Advice

something I want to tell all of ya...to prevent pain...

Fake:

Don't say that you love someone
unless you truly mean it so
for if you leace when the spark is gone
In the end you'll be their foe
Cuz they might believe, they might trust
They'll let you go if you really must
But inside they'll hope you'd just
Stay, as they turn into dust

Don't say that you love someone
If the next day, you'll want to leave
for towards the end by the shining sun
you'll be sorry you have decieved
Cuz they won't say but they will feel
the permanant scar that can't be healed
you will pay, down you'll kneel
and promise no more innocence you will steal

Dont say that you love someone
unless you truly mean it so
For if you leave when the spark is gone
again they might never glow
Cuz there's no other way to take
back the lies and all the fake
every morning as they awake
they have to feel their heart ache
so dont tell me that you love me
unless you really mean it so
for althoug i too, love thee
it will be hard to watch you go

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MellowYellow
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Registered: Mar 2002
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mmmmm.... yet anothet good poem from you...

keep writing...i think you're our best contributer to this forum



PS.... that's some good advice

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MC ChOpStiCkz
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wow u have such a way wit words :D very well done

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