I decided to use CRAZYDEB8ER cause he loves Yuri so much.
I was gon use BoA// but nah..
ENJOY

Character Introduction:
Yuri- main character
Victor- Yuri's Boyfriend
Chorong- Yuri's Bestfriend

The scene takes place in KOREA.
Yuri, Victor, Chorong, and their friends finally graduated from high school.
Yuri hugged all her friends. They all took pictures together.
All her friends, including Chorong, were planning to go to Hawaii together for a vacation.
Yuri decided she didn't want to go. She want to stay in Korea and go to college near her home.
Victor decided to get a better education and was planning to go to a University in America.
After the graduation was over, Yuri called all her friends and said,
Yuri: "Hey, I want everyone to meet up at my house so we could have a reunion party!"
Chorong: "When do we do the reunion?"
Yuri: "Um.. how about FIVE years from today?"
Victor: "That's a great idea!"
Yuri: "Ok, then, June 10th, my house, at 12:00 noon! I'll be expecting every one of you!!"

And everyone agreed to come for the reunion.

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During the five years, Yuri still talked on the phone with Victor.
However, she lost contact with Chorong and the rest of her friends.
5 Years Later.. day before the reunion party

Yuri woke up early in the morning.
She quickly washed up and ate half a bowl of noodles.
She bought all the food, decorations, beers, etc. that she would need for the party.
That night she decorated her house beautifully.

The next morning, June 10th, Yuri woke up at 6 am and started to cook food.
Finally, at 10 o’clock she was done.
She hit the showers and put on her new party dress.
She looked at her house and her food.
She was pleased at what she did.

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12 O‘ Clock..
*Ding dong, Ding dong*
Yuri ran for the door.
Her friends have finally arrived!!!
She hugged Chorong and all her other friends one by one.
Everyone came.. all except Victor.
Victor had not showed up yet.
Everyone was having a great time drinking, eating, and talking about the old school days.
But where was Victor?

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It was now 6:00 pm and there were no calls from Victor.
Yuri began to worry.
She called him up on his cell phone.
Victor: “hello?”
Yuri: “Victor! Where are you?”
Victor: “Oh, it‘s you baby! HI! I‘m at the airport right now. I just arrived in Japan. I‘ll be there soon.”
Yuri: “You should have called me earlier that you were going to be late! I was worried!”
Yuri: “hehe.. well i‘m alright. I‘ll be there soon!”

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It was now 9:00 pm.
Yuri was getting really worried.
She talked with Chorong to be comforted.
Yuri: “I wonder why Victor is taking so long.”
Chorong: “Victor?? HyunJin.. dont you know?”
Yuri: “Know what??”
Chorong: “I‘m sorry to tell you this but.. Victor died 5 years ago! His plane crashed.. he.. he never got to america.. I‘m terribly sorry, Yuri....”
Yuri: “WHAT?! you‘re a liar!! i JUST talked to him on the phone 3 hours ago!!”
Chorong: “I‘m sorry, Yuri.. you must have imagined it or something..”

Yuri asked her other friends if this was true..
everyone said the same thing..:
Victor had died on a plane crash 5 years ago

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*Ding dong, Ding dong*
the doorbell rang!
Yuri stopped what she was doing and ran for the door.
She knew it was Victor!! it had to be!!
She opened to the door, and there was Victor.
He was standing there with flowers for her.
Yuri let a sigh of relief, and hugged her boyfriend for the first time in 5 years.
Yuri: “Oh Victor! its you! its really you! Chorong and everyone lied to me! they said you died and they scared me and they--”
Yuri was crying, she was so relieved he was dead.
Victor: “Yuri, darling, dont cry. Who told you I was dead? did you say Chorong?”
Yuri: “Yes! and everyone else told me!”
Victor: “Are you alright? I‘m sorry Yuri, but Chorong and everyone else died 5 years ago. They died in the plane crash on their way to Hawaii.”
Yuri screamed.
Yuri: “AHHHHHHH!! STOP! QUIT TELLING ME WHO DIED! NO ONE DIED!!”
Yuri pointed to the party and said
Yuri: “Look Victor! dont you see them back there?!”
Victor: “See who?? i dont see anyone!”
Yuri turned around.

There was only the music playing loudly.
All the food had been eaten.
All the beers and champaign had been drunk..
But there was no one in the house but her and Victor.

THE END

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question!!!

how did yuri remember the reunion..if she forgot chorong?
i mean it was chorongs idea in the first place.....

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Originally posted by TAIgrr
After the graduation was over, Yuri called all her friends and said,
Yuri: "Hey, I want everyone to meet up at my house so we could have a reunion party!"
Chorong: "When do we do the reunion?"
Yuri: "Um.. how about FIVE years from today?"
Victor: "That's a great idea!"
Yuri: "Ok, then, June 10th, my house, at 12:00 noon! I'll be expecting every one of you!!"

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READ IT CORRECTLY, TONY.
Yuri planned out the reunion.

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maybe yuri got lonely without victor...got drunk with all the beer....and in her drunken state..saw chorong and her other friends....and ate all the food herself LOL

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lol..
possible*
but not in this story..
its a ghost story!!
blah..

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argh i heard this story before! freaaaky...lol but thanks for puttin me in your story...WITH YURI!!! (V)

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you heard it before?!!?!
but i frqn made it up!!!
:omg: !
unless you read it in SOOMPI.COM long time ago in the scary story thread...

other than that.. where'd you hear that story from?

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yea i read it there. I used to post at soompi. Then i got driven out cause i was too old. And male hahah jp

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freaky. i'm going camping and i'll hav to tell that one

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heh.. um, actually..
i didnt make up this story :satisfy:
my japanese teacher told our class this.
the main character was his younger sister.
this story is actually true.
he said his sister also saw dead people sometimes..
i dont know if he was telling the truth or not..
but anyway, scary

lol.. credits to my japanese teacher
but i get credit for RE-MAKING the story to make it lil more scarier

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oh hell.....if that ever happened to me...

how could....... and they were telling yuri that vic was dead....

are you sure that's a true story? what's the origional story? what'd you re-vamp?

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:omg: OMG... just reading about how chorong said that victor was dead scared the shizznuts outta me... I got the shivers *shivers* eck...

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Originally posted by MellowYellow
oh hell.....if that ever happened to me...

how could....... and they were telling yuri that vic was dead....

are you sure that's a true story? what's the origional story? what'd you re-vamp?

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um.. not any real changes
just changes in names of the character..
and i extended it with the conversations and everything, making it dramatic..

so i guess MY story is the EXTENDED version of my teacher's original story

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Originally posted by Crazydeb8ter
yea i read it there. I used to post at soompi. Then i got driven out cause i was too old. And male hahah jp

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im 15 haha

the standard age there is like 10-12 so ....yeaa

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