this is most definately my deepest drop ever..hope yall enjoy it

let me take you back in time/in nineteen eighty-four
i was born in suwon, south korea/ its somewhere near seoul
i had a sister/sophia/she was already five
she treated me so well/damn it felt good being alive

but i lived in a shed/with just a table inside
my mother hoping, this time/we'll have some dinner tonight
my pathetic father/making less than minimum wage
coming home pissed off/always full of fury and rage

bitching and crying/how he wants to get away from this place
took his anger out on my mother/brushing his fist on her face
i remember my sister trying to stop him/but he would fuck her up too
i was just a fucking kid!/what the hell could i do?!

i remember these kids/that used to play on my street
they were older than me/so they decided to beat the shit out of me
i would cry to my father/but he would just call me a bitch
next thing i know/i wake up, find myself in a ditch

" he must have beat me again, " that's what i said to myself
i always wondered how my father could/live with himself
he shutted my life/as if i was a can on a lid
yea this is how it went/when i was a kid

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hey yo thats kinda sad... =T

nice tho

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yo that was sum niiiice shit...i was feelin it...keep'em comin

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Originally posted by LiLbLuEaZnBoY
hey yo thats kinda sad... =T

nice tho

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dang...nice lyrics jon..=\ well thats over now. so chin up! =)

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sounds like a song ~
..dunno what to say.
cept that your hella talented with what you do..

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Originally posted by kRypTic_nABi
sounds like a song ~
..dunno what to say.
cept that your hella talented with what you do..

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deep dat was sad good flow though

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deep.

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thanks..glad yall liked it

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its real... hella real... i been through shiz similar tOo... thx for sharing oppa!

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its real... hella real... i been through shiz similar tOo... thx for sharing oppa!

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that was really good

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each one of yours that I read is on a technical level better than the last. Each is deep too. You're good. :thumbup:

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each one of yours that I read is on a technical level better than the last. Each is deep too. You're good. :thumbup:

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thanks tommy..

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MAN! That was really moving! U nearly made me cry! No joke!
But first i got one question: are u a singer? meaning are u working for a record company or somtin?

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MAN! That was really moving! U nearly made me cry! No joke!
But first i got one question: are u a singer? meaning are u working for a record company or somtin?

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haha! dunno man! maybe its your so good and i guess i was tired. :baaa:

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