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Unhappy The Truth

The Truth
By: ChaCha
1/20/2004

Yesterday my heaven shook
Down came bloodsheds as raindrops
It hit me then that I needed an answer.
So down I shout to where you stood.

You replied you wanted us to end.
I took a sigh and let go of my pain
Once again I returned to earth and next to you I stood.
I think its time that you heard the truth…
The truth of how I feel.

Every time we connected,
All I wanted to say was how much I missed you so.
Every time I saw you, I just wanted to hold you close.
You asked me one time what I really wanted…
In truth, I desired to be with you.

You touched my soul like no others ever done.
In love I fell with you.
So close I came to make you mine.
But so fast you slipped away.

My final thought is just to say…
In my heart …
You will…
Forever stay.

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There are times... or maybe... Every person is riding on that emotional roller coaster and perhaps that's why I'm not very fond of this poem at the moment.

Is this your poem? Who is ChaCha (an alias?)?

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yea it is..
sorry chacha is my other name..
hmm yea the poem is really emotional..
wrote it coupla days ago
Sorry I'm going thru some emotional stuff lately..

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