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Jusunlee matrix 3

I fell from that hole, into an ocean of acid. I didn't see well, and everything on my body hurt. Every move I made was like moving in molasses, molasses on fire. I bobbed in the acid, and could hear a faint humming that grew louder, then I went under. Burning, burning, burning, it was like feeling the burn from a nuclear bomb test. Hey, maybe this was Hell, can¡¯t die anymore can I? Maybe I should have gone to church more¡¦

As my brain died from my lack of oxygen everything blacked out.

When I woke, I was attached to something like an IV. People were gathered around me. The faint metronome like sound of my heart being monitored. Quiet chatter;

"Why are we keeping him alive?"
"He can lead us to the matrix's main data bases."
"What can we do with that information?"
"That's for me and the leaders of the resistance to know."
"And we follow like sheep..."
"Yeah."

My heart raced a little quicker. I opened my eyes to the bright lights of heaven. Maybe those childhood years saved me? Praising a God I hardly knew? Maybe.

Iron Lion Zion¡¦

Bob Marley? Zion? What?

Iron Lion Zion¡¦

I blacked out.

¡°So this is the famous Jusun Lee?¡±
¡°Not much but a scrawny body¡¦¡±
¡°Old world holocaust survivor huh?¡±
¡°The matrix not feeding him?¡±
¡°Geuss not.¡±
¡°This kid killed the horus?¡±
¡°Apparently¡¦ shit man, is it safe to have him here?¡±
¡°I don¡¯t think he¡¯s bugged.¡±


I am on the rock and then I check a stock
I have to run like a fugitive to save the life I live

I stood up real quick and screamed. ¡°STOP SINGING!¡±

¡°What the fuck??¡±
¡°Shit! He¡¯s up! Hahaha, go get Narc.¡±

I'm gonna be Iron like a Lion in Zion
Iron Lion Zion

I'm on the run but I ain't got no gun
See they want to be the star
So they fighting tribal war

And they saying Iron like a Lion in Zion
Iron like a Lion in Zion,
Iron Lion Zion

¡°STOP SINGING! STOP IT! AARRGH!¡±
¡°What the hell are you talking about?¡±

The music that split my head open like an axe stopped suddenly and all I could hear was a faint humming of some machinery.

¡°Where am I?¡±
¡°Welcome to the real world copper top.¡±

This big asian guy, muscled like none other, grabbed me by the shoulders and slammed me against the wall.

¡°My name is Terk. and you better treat me with some respect there. You hear?¡±
¡°Yeah I hear.¡±

He dropped me back into the bed.

¡°You¡¯re on the Intel ship called 666.¡±
¡°Intel ship? We¡¯re at sea?¡±
¡°Ah yes, you¡¯re fresh out of the oven I see, no. Put it this way, you¡¯re not in Kansas anymore.¡±

The woman I saw on the highway came into the room with a short black man. Terk turned and said

¡°Hey Narc, how are ya?¡±

She punched him square in the face, sending him sprawling back into the wall rubbing his chin.

¡°What the hell were you doing in here?¡±
¡°Hey, calm down. Jesus. Hey kid, she¡¯s a feisty one, you better watch out for her eh?¡±
¡°Shut up Terk.¡±

She came over and started inspecting me. I was kind of hoping she¡¯d make me cough. As she inspected me, I inspected her, you know? The kinds of things that guys notice.

She was about 5¡¯3¡¯¡¯, fair complexion. I¡¯d say half white? half asian? Long hair down to her back tied in a ponytail. Breasts I¡¯d say b cup? Not a bad ass either.

¡°How do you feel?¡±
¡°Fine, I guess.¡±
¡°Nothing wrong?¡±
¡°Not that I¡¯m aware of. Where am I?¡±
¡°Well, you think its 1999, and its not. We¡¯re not sure what year it is, but now machines have taken over the earth and used people as batteries because humans blotted out the sky in order to defeat the machines. To keep humans pacified they created a program in which a simulated world is created, we call this world the matrix.¡±
¡°What???¡±
¡°Shut up.¡±

She left the room and Terk and the black guy were laughing their asses off.

The black man extended his hand towards me and introduced himself as Etel.

¡°That¡¯s our captian Narc. Like her?¡±
¡°She¡¯s charming.¡±
¡°You should of heard her after we shot you.¡± Terk chimed in.
¡°You¡¯re the ones who shot me?¡±
¡°Well I was. Etel didn¡¯t , he was in the back seat with Narc.¡±
¡°What the hell is this about?¡±
¡°Kid you¡¯re a valuable asset to our resistance against the matrix.¡±
¡°What?¡±
¡°You¡¯re the best hacker in the matrix since Neo.¡±
¡°No way.¡±
¡°You killed an entire crew of a the ship Horus because you gave the Agents information on them.¡±

Ever make a mistake and go ¡°woops!¡±? Fuck yeah.

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