i wrote this poem when i was thinking so yep here it is

It's time to give up
All my feelings pouring into a big cup
Trying to act tough when I say sup
Thinking it was a dream, telling myself to wake up

I know it won't work between us
But I'm here to just confess
Trying not to looks like a damsel in distress
Without you I'm without success

I love you with all of my heart can't you see
I'm not joking I can guarantee
For you I would go to the North Sea
But sooner or later I'm going to have to set you free

I know what everyone is saying
Follow your heart and start praying
But I don't feel like obeying
Wondering what will happen while I start laying

I'm trying to be brave for my sake
Trying so hard not to look or act fake
My heart begins to weep and ache
I'm going around like a blind snake

I just wanted to tell you I love you
It’s time now to renew
Myself and break through
All this pain I've pulled into

Last edited by Chinesegrl on 08-17-2003 at 08:14 PM

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omg!!! That was so good jenny^^

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great expression

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nice work ^_^

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