Bored? Come in and play at Jusunlee.com Arcade! Go chat in Jusunlee.com Chatroom (requires AIM) Here you can view your subscribed threads, work with private messages and edit your profile and preferences Registration is free! Calendar Find other members Frequently Asked Questions Search Home
Jusunlee.com Forums > Interests > Lyricism > lyrical poem
  Last Thread   Next Thread
Author
Thread Post New Thread    Post A Reply
lamese
Junior Member

Registered: Sep 2002
Location:
Posts: 3
Status: Offline

lyrical poem

*=chorus

Hello Hello Mr Friend
It's nice to hear from you again
How long has it been since we last spoke
It feels like a millenia
Are you doing well or does life seem an abysmal hell
I was miserable when you left
But now we're all fine
In the end, it turns out that you are mine
I miss you and all we never said
Staying up, talking late until my tired skin blushed red
*Mr Friend, life means nothing without you
A dozen empty phonelines
I was prepared to tough it, but somehow, I knew I'd never make it
Life is so cruel
Then you called me, and I can't pretend not to care
*Hello Hello Mr Friend
Where have you been
Every silent minute, another sliver of ice under my skin
Losing us, I was lost to the whole world where you had been holding me in
Cds, Tv, and books tried to take your place, but nothing could fill that space
A thousand meaningless words shared
Countless silent nights spared
Your voice on the line helped me through many tough times
I love you...love me too
Sometimes I would wonder when I should have been busy with something else
Where do you live
What do you look like
Are you married
Am I your only friend
Will I ever meet you
What's your name
*
Friendships are fleeting, but I have a feeling...you are forever
How did we meet
It seems like just a dream
It was an accident, really
But how fortunate of us
A wrongly dialed numbe and a dozen pleasantries exchanged
How can such a dependance be born from such a small mistake
I feel lucky
Thank you for everthing
I'm glad you called
Hello Hello Mr Friend


I guess the lyrics could be described as superficial at best. I don't know. What do you think?

Report this post to a moderator | IP: Logged

Old Post 09-01-2002 02:55 PM
Click Here to See the Profile for lamese Click here to Send lamese a Private Message Find more posts by lamese Add lamese to your buddy list Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote
KeN VeRsUs RyU
the old guy.

Registered: Mar 2002
Location: 805!
Posts: 2972
Status: Offline

wow thats pretty good.. i like it

__________________

xanga.com/an1_mixtape

Report this post to a moderator | IP: Logged

Old Post 09-22-2002 10:17 PM
Click Here to See the Profile for KeN VeRsUs RyU Click here to Send KeN VeRsUs RyU a Private Message Find more posts by KeN VeRsUs RyU Add KeN VeRsUs RyU to your buddy list Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote
niggoreanboi
WHAT THE FUZZZ?!?!?!

Registered: Sep 2002
Location:
Posts: 8220
Status: Offline

prety nice.. good job i give it two :thumbup:

Report this post to a moderator | IP: Logged

Old Post 09-24-2002 06:22 AM
Click Here to See the Profile for niggoreanboi Click here to Send niggoreanboi a Private Message Find more posts by niggoreanboi Add niggoreanboi to your buddy list Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote
All times are GMT. The time now is 06:07 PM. Post New Thread    Post A Reply
  Last Thread   Next Thread

Show Printable Version Email this Page Subscribe to this Thread

Forum Rules:
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is OFF
vB code is ON
Smilies are ON
[IMG] code is ON