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Hyesungu
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Goodbye

As I sit here all alone
Thinking of what we once had
I can feel my tears fall
Because I'm just so sad
I really thought you were
My one true destiny
That is until you said those words
That you no longer loved me
So you left me behind
Saying a short goodbye
And slowly walked away
As I started to cry
Knowing now that its truly over
My heart destroyed in an istant
I feel as though I will never love again..


Dont ever take love for granted..

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MellowYellow
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hmm, brooding. don't be so down. I suppose it serves as inspiration? Sorry i guess it's not necessarily a good time to mention that.... unless it's not from true experience. If it is, sorry for your loss.

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Hyesungu
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thank you. It is from true experience. I just have to pull myself together and try to move on. How hard thats going to be? I have no idea..

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craziistarz
where is the love?

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did you and yur girl.. break up?

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Hyesungu
Mike p(X.X)q

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quote:
Originally posted by craziistarz
did you and yur girl.. break up?


unfortunately we did...

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MasWusHot
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quote:
Originally posted by Hyesungu
unfortunately we did...

aww thats too bad , thats a really nice poem, sry to hear u broke up

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craziistarz
where is the love?

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quote:
Originally posted by Hyesungu
unfortunately we did...


eeeek i'm so sorry.. =*(

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kiggaplease
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sorry to hear that, man

I take back what I said about you giving me her digits

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