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J-DraGoNz
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Registered: Jul 2002
Location: Orange County, Cali
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"My Life"

Heres another old poem by me...i never write poems anymore...so i guess all my poems are old..

anways..its kinda ghetto...but here it is..."My Life"


My life, i feel, is slowly fading,
I cant stop it anymore, i cant keep waiting,
My life got fucked over and over again,
Everything becomes better, but its impossible to sustain,
I cant help it anymore, its driving me insane,
Why cant i just die, and leave this cursed plain,
Nothing is worth living for anymore,
My life is just feeling so poor,
I feel trapped as if i were in a cell,
Trying to struggle free from this hell,
Oh Lord, why must things be this way,
I feel as if i have been betrayed,
Why must there be so much pain,
Take me away from my world of shame,
Please Lord, just end my misery,
And let the rest of my life, remain a mystery.

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nice poem. ::

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