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SFMC
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Cover

Here is a new piece for a comic I'm doing for myself. C&C are welcome.

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wow. i really like it. awesome stuff.
the scar if blowing but the smoke isnt blowing that much. =/
well overall i like it! ^^

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dope.

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thats really good drawing and coloring.

but its kinda wierd that the scarf is blowing and not the smoke

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amazing, your really skilled, awesome drawing man

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thats TIGHT!! lol...its madd nice. does he have a holster for that gun?

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dam everybody pays so muhc attention to detail n stuf ... heh .. i wouldnt have noticed the smoke and scarf flowin or nething

but yea. . i think its really good .. seriously .. i dunno why you need to show us yuor work .. cuz it seems like yur work should already be professional n stuff ... get what i mean???

always likin yur works!! .. awesome job!

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Thx alot guys and girls for the scarf error. I never noticed this till you guys mentioned it. I'm going to have to come back and change it now. Why do i show my work? To get a crit and to see my mistakes i cannot see. See what these people just showed me, they have very good eyes. I wish I was a pro in comics. I'ts not that easy, but i do freelance work so thats pretty cool. Thanks again for the feeback guys!

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wow !! thats really good artwork! you are a true artist

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Looks really professional. I would say you have a strong chance at succeeding in the comic world - keep posting!

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wow... hella good... but yeah smoke and scarf isnt going the same direction

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the box's perspective and his legs dont go towerd the same
vanishing point... i think the angle on the top of the box is
a bit too steep... or the bottom is too steep

but its overall and excellent piece

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quote:
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the box's perspective and his legs dont go towerd the same
vanishing point... i think the angle on the top of the box is
a bit too steep... or the bottom is too steep

but its overall and excellent piece



Well the way he's sitting doesnt always have to be in perspective. He could be sitting more at the edge of the box at a different angle a bit. The box is also a lot shorter and smaller making his knees angle like that. If I made both the legs and box go towards the same vanishing point it would call for bad composition and too symetrical. I totally understand what you were going at though. Thanks for the goos crit.

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quote:
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the box's perspective and his legs dont go towerd the same
vanishing point... i think the angle on the top of the box is
a bit too steep... or the bottom is too steep

but its overall and excellent piece



well i see your point but his leg seems to be 53.235 degrees off center and his expression is only 2.343 cm.. . u get the point

its good dont let poeple say theres stuff wrong with it. maybe hes in a wind tunnel or something.

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HOLY SHIT!!!! Is this gona be for sale or online comic or what?? Awesome stuff !!!!!!!!!!

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