Bored? Come in and play at Jusunlee.com Arcade! Go chat in Jusunlee.com Chatroom (requires AIM) Here you can view your subscribed threads, work with private messages and edit your profile and preferences Registration is free! Calendar Find other members Frequently Asked Questions Search Home
Jusunlee.com Forums > Entertainment > Creative Writing > Limerick : Bird
  Last Thread   Next Thread
Author
Thread Post New Thread    Post A Reply
MellowYellow
Moderator

Registered: Mar 2002
Location: In Transition, CA
Posts: 3259
Status: Offline

Limerick : Bird

Bird

I don’t know if that Bird ever flies,
It just sits in its own cage and sighs.
Even if it gets out,
It will not fly about.
Too bad Bird is a rat in disguise!
_______________________________

Everyone knows what a limerick is : aabba rhyming scheme. 3 anapestic feet in the 1st, 2nd, and 5th lines and 2 anapestic feet in the 3rd and 4th lines (anapestic foot : unstressed, unstressed, stressed [uu/]) Just another school assignment. I heard that usually limericks are dirty ^_^. lol.

__________________
I hate google cache.

Report this post to a moderator | IP: Logged

Old Post 03-04-2004 05:54 AM
Click Here to See the Profile for MellowYellow Click here to Send MellowYellow a Private Message Find more posts by MellowYellow Add MellowYellow to your buddy list Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote
sweetthing
Member

Registered: Feb 2004
Location: Georgia
Posts: 37
Status: Offline

most of the limericks i have heard are dirty........but hilarious
u did nice workd too!
when i was a freshman we had a choice between writing limericks or haiku on one assignment............i chose haiku
i didnt like writing either one..........i like writing with no boundries
i'm just not talented enough to write in boundries

__________________
"What happens to a Dream Defferred"

Report this post to a moderator | IP: Logged

Old Post 03-06-2004 12:05 AM
Click Here to See the Profile for sweetthing Click here to Send sweetthing a Private Message Find more posts by sweetthing Add sweetthing to your buddy list Edit/Delete Message Reply w/Quote
All times are GMT. The time now is 02:14 PM. Post New Thread    Post A Reply
  Last Thread   Next Thread

Show Printable Version Email this Page Subscribe to this Thread

Forum Rules:
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is OFF
vB code is ON
Smilies are ON
[IMG] code is ON