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LiLboy
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hmm..another short poem

whatever what may come
whoever it may be
remember there is one
who will always make u see

the light is not far off
the fulfillment not so deep
with time and hope
it will soon be withiin your reach

the past is always present
but the present is not your past
forget that all has become of you
remember to make this moment, last

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awwww i like dat poem. nice job! keep it up!

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saranghae
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awww... how sweet! hehe... i'm gonna put that on my binder... u don't mine do u?

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LiLboy
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:D thanks foe da commentz~

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anata`dake
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ur poem is nice
the fatc that its a poem is nice
it shows that u've spent a lot of time thinking about issues and stuff, like ur constantly discovering new things
dats why its so hard to write a poem, to be able to express something
that means so much to u in an ambigous way

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i like how it rhymes.haha ....

well i like the poem too but yea.....i like how it rhymes

nice :thumbup:

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