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merdawg
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My Song Is Here!!!!!!

http://jusunlee.com/forums/showthre...;threadid=11392

that links to the lyrics

this here goes to the song:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/merdawgmusic.htm

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WoO HoO u recorded it~!! I like it a lot, the beat is nice and u sound goOd ..nice work!!

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original songs belong in lyricism - moved

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oOo this is great! ^_^; nice voice hehe ^_^ haha lovin the beat

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nice song, i liked the lyrics. is this an OG beat? i like the vocals in the backround. that beat kinda bugs after a while, the melody. you have like no emotion, you sound way too monotone. a few parts in the song were really loud compared to the rest of the song. But great song. i like


Beat: B-
Lyrics: A
Delivery: C
Hook/Chorus: B
Production: B+

Overall: B

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quote:
Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
nice song, i liked the lyrics. is this an OG beat? i like the vocals in the backround. that beat kinda bugs after a while, the melody. you have like no emotion, you sound way too monotone. a few parts in the song were really loud compared to the rest of the song. But great song. i like


Beat: B-
Lyrics: A
Delivery: C
Hook/Chorus: B
Production: B+

Overall: B



lol...thanx for the rating. the parts that were louder were suppose to be louder. and if u notice, they were the parts that were important.[well to me they were]. and the monotone part, thats how i am. [very mellow]. and beat buggin, really? ok.

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J-DraGoNz
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actually, beat doesnt bug too much. its just how i am i guess =/. and if i might add, this song is MUCH MUCH better then my first track about the girl i like~

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Omo.. wow this is your song...? It's mad good.. whoa.. how do you do that!?!?

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quote:
Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
original songs belong in lyricism - moved


why does it? for lyricism you should add a section for audio battle or something or something so you can put original music in it.

coo track nice job

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quote:
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why does it? for lyricism you should add a section for audio battle or something or something so you can put original music in it.

coo track nice job




jusun wont allow me to ahve another subforum in lyricism

believe me, ive tried

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jusun wont allow me to ahve another subforum in lyricism

believe me, ive tried



aww well that sucks

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wow MER THATS REALLY GOOD! don't sound like u though lol ohwell it's all good! it's good

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kickass!!!!

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wow madd props!

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