yea i kno i posted this in lyricism already, but no one goes tehre...lol.

Lol...this is a really ghetto song...i wrote these lyrics like a year ago, but i never got a beat for it...and i made one, and it was REALLLY ghetto so i didnt want to make it. But i decided that i should jsut finish it since everythings done anyway...so i used the really wack ass beat and started recording. its all finally done. I orignally was singing the chorus, but it was so bad, and people didnt like it so i changed the lyrics and i rapped it out instead of singing it.


http://rapstation.com/artists/J_Dra...n_t_You_See.mp3


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Artist: J-DraGoNz
Title: Don't You See
Beat by: J-DraGoNz

<Verse 1>
I never thought I'd feel this way about you//
Never thought I'd feel the way that I now do//
We became friends and it took a while//
But i soon realized i was falling in love with you//
Everyday i think of you, again and again//
To me you've become more then a friend//
But our friendship means everything to me//
I guess its my destiny to live in misery//
Without you, for all of eternity//
I cant even imagine what will become of me//
You could never know the pain that i feel//
When i see you with someone else//
Its hard for me to keep it real//
Dont you see that your the only one for me//
Theres no one else that id rather be with//
I love you, why cant you just see this//
Dont you see, theres nothing else to it//
Ill never get through it//
Without you, theres nothing left to live for//
Without you, i dont even wanna live anymore//


<Hook>
Dont you see girl, your everything to me//
You alone are the one that set me free//
Dont you see girl, your love is the only key//
To ending my pain, my sorrow, and my misery//
Dont you see girl, your love is all i need//
With you beisde me, i know i will succeed//
Dont you see girl, without you, i will fail indeed//
Being with you is the only way to get off this weed//


<Verse 2>
Not a day goes by when i dont think of you//
Thoughts of you fill my head everyday im not with you//
Ill be by your side, always, no matter what u do//
Dont you see girl im just miserable without you//
your the one i wanna be with for eternity//
dont you see, without you, theres nothing in my life but misery//
i wanna be by ur side, till da day dat i die//
i jus wanna hold u n never let go//
i love you girl, i jus want you to know//
as a friend u have done so much for me//
you helped me pick up my life when all that was left was debris//
You were my best friend, the only one i could ever trust//
if it wasnt for you, i would be forever lost//
you were there for every situation i was facin//
and without explaination you were there to understand//
when the rest of da world, jus didnt give a damn//
you helped me ease my pains and struggles//
you got me through all my troubles//
you helped me relieve stress from my soul//
but my feelings for you, you could never know//


<Hook>
Dont you see girl that your everything to me//
You alone are the one who set me free//
Dont you see girl, your love is the only key//
To ending my pain, my sorrow, and my misery//
Dont you see girl, your love is all i need//
With you beisde me, i know i will succeed//
Dont you see girl, without you, i will fail indeed//
Being with you is the only way to get off this weed//


<Verse 3>
I love you girl, i jus dunno how to show it//
you mean everything to me, just kno this//
i love everything about you girl//
you alone are my entire world//
i love the way u laugh n smile//
for you, id walk a 1000 miles//
theres nothing that i wouldnt do for you//
but to think i even had a chance with you//
i must have been a fool//
my love for you has blinded me from reality//
how foolish it was for me//
to think, you would ever love me//


<Hook>
Dont you see girl, your everything to me//
You alone are the one that set me free//
Dont you see girl, your love is the only key//
To ending my pain, my sorrow, and my misery//
Dont you see girl, your love is all i need//
With you beisde me, i know i will succeed//
Dont you see girl, without you, i will fail indeed//
Being with you is the only way to get off this weed//
(x2)

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Last edited by J-DraGoNz on 01-01-2003 at 07:22 AM

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wow!! this is good!!
look im the first to reply! sorri i know its off the subject (' -_-)

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lol thanks...atleast someone took the time to listen and reply for once -_-

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heh .. sorry usually i dont like d/l mp3's cuz they take too long to d/l .. specially with my dial up ! hah ..

im really liking the lyrics .. and i like they way you rapped them .. ( sometimes it sounded like you were rushing it though .. ) but the majority of the time ... things flowed well .. i liked the type you used your voice in as the background vocals ...

uhm not to hot on the beat ... it's cool that you made up a beat for your first time though ... but .. i feel it doesnt really bring out the lyrics ?? like its too repetitive .. cuz its the same beat for the verse and the hook except its kinda louder during the hook .. ( hope you get what i mean ) im not dissin anything ..

good job on your first song .. hopefully when you get more experience workin the beats .. you could come up with a new one ..

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Originally posted by iTsmeehLita
heh .. sorry usually i dont like d/l mp3's cuz they take too long to d/l .. specially with my dial up ! hah ..

im really liking the lyrics .. and i like they way you rapped them .. ( sometimes it sounded like you were rushing it though .. ) but the majority of the time ... things flowed well .. i liked the type you used your voice in as the background vocals ...

uhm not to hot on the beat ... it's cool that you made up a beat for your first time though ... but .. i feel it doesnt really bring out the lyrics ?? like its too repetitive .. cuz its the same beat for the verse and the hook except its kinda louder during the hook .. ( hope you get what i mean ) im not dissin anything ..

good job on your first song .. hopefully when you get more experience workin the beats .. you could come up with a new one ..

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