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Ladi Jay
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I'm on the Senior Hit List!

So I guess I wrote an editorial for our school newspaper that really stirred the whole school yesterday! Teachers were yapping about it and students were bitching about it. The seniors are pissed and I've made it into their hit list!

This is the article:
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No Respect For Scharenbroich: OUTRAGEOUS
By: Kana Vang

Minutes after the assembly had begun, the guest speaker, Mark Scharenbroich, asked for each class to raise their hands–starting with the freshmen, sophomores, juniors, and then seniors. As Scharenbroich called out the classes, I looked around and began to realize that the hands from each class became smaller and smaller in number. When he called the juniors, they raised their arms and yelled a loud “Woot!” to show their pride in being juniors. But when he called the seniors, I saw an embarrassingly small amount of hands–approximately 40, if that much. This upset me greatly.

It was extremely embarrassing to see the small amount of hands from the seniors when they are the ones being looked up to. They are the ones every student finds to be the big “adult” kids. They are the ones everyone would think know better than to leave an important assembly DURING SCHOOL. They are the ones who are supposed to leave a great impression on the underclassmen.

I, as an underclassman to the seniors, found it especially embarrassing that such a small amount of seniors showed up to an important, as well as exciting, assembly. If you see any class raise their hands and only a small amount of hands appear, you’d agree it IS embarrassing to their class. Now, I’m not only blaming the seniors because I’m sure plenty juniors, sophomores, and freshmen left. But when you see that the seniors of your school have no respect for something every student does not get on an ordinary day, you can’t help but blame them more than the rest who don’t have just as much respect—especially because the seniors have the most impact on everyone in a school environment. They exert the most impact even on outsiders.

Those who left missed a superb assembly, have no respect for themselves, and no respect for the speaker’s effort. Also, it was still a school day and everyone knows not to leave school during the school day, unless they have given a legitimate excuse. They have not only embarrassed themselves, but as well as their classmates, their teachers, and the school. They have shown an outsider how much pride they have in their school–which in this case, isn’t very much.

Next time we have a great speaker–if we ever do again because of our lack in respect this time–we all should participate. We all should show that we appreciate his or her time and effort greatly. Not every school receives great speakers like Scharenbroich. We are from one of the few lucky schools that got to spend time with him. When you receive such an opportunity, don’t take advantage of it. Not only will the guest speaker not want to come next time, but the people who put all their time and effort into bringing us something different and spectacular won’t want to plan another event again.

To those who left school, have more respect for yourself as well as others. Realize that you really did miss an outstanding assembly. If you ask anyone, I’m sure he or she would tell you that the assembly WAS exciting. And to those who participated, I thank you and BOOMBA HEY! =)
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w00t!!!


what was the assembly about?

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u actually wrote boomba hey in your article?

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I think that the last paragraph is unnecessary; you already stated the point in an earlier section with better writing.

You have an excellent point though. Respect is essential for maintaining a strong community and judging from your article, describing your school as a community would be a very far stretch indeed.

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Re: I'm on the Senior Hit List!

quote:
Originally posted by Ladi Jay
They have shown an outsider how much pride they have in their school–which in this case, isn’t very much.


I don't have much pride in my school, well it's the school's population that sometimes bugs me. Some people are cool but others aren't. I see school pride as pertaining to the school population.

quote:
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To those who left school, have more respect for yourself as well as others. Realize that you really did miss an outstanding assembly. If you ask anyone, I’m sure he or she would tell you that the assembly WAS exciting.


You don't need to show up to a school assembly to have respect for yourself, but it does show respect for others.

Exciting is subjective, what seems exciting for someone may not seem exciting to another. Look at the movie Titanic.

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YEAH BIRCH!!

That's about as much school pride as I get I guess, but then again if school pride inolved vandalism...

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boomba hey, that sounds familiar. Was he a motivational speaker, who at one point in his presentation, does a musical interactive thing where he divides the audience in two and has one say something like boomba, in some rhythm or another, and the other yell out hey?

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quote:
Originally posted by Alchemist
YEAH BIRCH!!

That's about as much school pride as I get I guess, but then again if school pride inolved vandalism...



YEAH!

As for the original topic...they showed a huge lack of respect for the speaker and the school by doing that, so I agree with you on that. However, I don't think it's necessary to emphasize how exciting it was. It doesn't matter how exciting the assembly is; the point is, you're expected to be there, people want you to be there, so you should be there.

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good article, although if the assembly's not mandatory, students should be able to decide for themselves

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quote:
Originally posted by PsychoSnowman
boomba hey, that sounds familiar. Was he a motivational speaker, who at one point in his presentation, does a musical interactive thing where he divides the audience in two and has one say something like boomba, in some rhythm or another, and the other yell out hey?


yep! Mark Scharenbroich! And he IS a great speaker! Kept my attention the whole time.

acidbreeze: I don't think it was mandatory but it was during school. So basically, the kids who left skipped school.

aaqthree: the reason why I put "exciting" into my editorial was because I wanted the kids to feel like they really missed out on something "exciting"... I wanted to make them feel bad for skipping and wish they did get to be a part of it. Perhaps that was the whole point of my editorial. And apparently, it worked because it sure stirred the whole school. They still talk about it today.

kryogenix: Mark's whole point was to "Live and Love"!

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Need me to put the seniors on the graduated hit list for ya? ;)

(haven't talked to you in FOREVER )

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