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Nojeel
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Lost Love......Pt. 5

thought this was more lyrical then it was a poem..but i put in both sections anyways

that first day when you appeared before my eyes
i saw within you/you were a angel in disguise,
the first smile i saw from you/it took my breathe away
already wishing i could be your man someday

next time i saw you again/i was overwhelmed with delight
but when i tried to talk to you/i froze in shivering fright
didn't know what to say/just stared into your face
if only you knew/all i wanted was you to embrace

spent time with each other everyday/it was always you and me
getting to know each other/you always drinking tappioca tea
too shy to make the move and admit my feelings/so i always hesitated
never thought i liked you that way/so you never even waited

eventually we became friends/nothing more and nothing less
but secretly i loved you more than that/i just had to confess
on june 22, 1998 at 8.36pm/i told you how i truly felt/
how every second i was with you/you'd make my heart melt

there was a pause of silence/not a even one word was spoken
saying to myself, this was a mistake/prepared to get my heart broken
you came up to me/with tears streaming down your cheek
holding me and saying "i love you"/making me unable to speak

as you sat there crying/with your head gently pressed on my chest
tightly holding me, not letting go/this feeling was truly the best
had no doubt in my mind/that you were the one for me
as if god put us on this earth/knowing that were meant to be

i will never forget that moment in time/i will always treasure it
it never slips my mind/it stays with me every single minute
can't do this by myself/need you to help me stand on my own two feet
so when the day comes/i can walk up to heaven when we'll once again meet

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jon you rock.

that was really good.
heh, I feel stupid saying that, but I don't know how else to react to that. I appreciated it though, hope everything's cool with you.

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dayum jon! ur hella goot... i think it helps dat u write about wut u went through.. its adds dat lil special *sumthin* to it... (i needa thesaurus) hella real... hellla goot...

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thanks yall..appreciate it

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perspetivez... thats all.

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Thumbs up

great job jon oppa~!

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