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[poem] With Him...

The curtains blowing in the sky,
going up and down, then flying by...
The early sun rising in its peak,
and I remember the face, his face, that I seek.

I just want to be with him...
His light laughter, his adorable smile...
too bad that I haven't seen or heard both in awhile...
His ruffled hair, his sparkling eyes...
makes me want to go to him, to soar; to fly...

I just want to be with him...
I want to feel his warm embrace;
after I run into his arms in haste...

I just want to be with him...
My white dove...
My eternal love...
My prize; my treasure...
My forever pleasure...

I just want to be with him...
But he will not come...
Because he's up in heaven; my angel; my love...
Someday I will see him again..I will come...
All he has to do is wait for me...Will you my love?

wow..speechless..that was very impressive...i was feelin' that..keep up the good work.. ^_^

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Recongizable

very good stuff... im sure jon relates... keep up the good stuff you have some great potential and talent in yah

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Enter My Head!

wow that was a really nice poem~

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its better to lose a lover, than to love a loser

wow....

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"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. " - Bruce Lee

awww