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suffocate

scream with all your might
but nothing will they hear
you'll fall in bloody fright
and your eyes will slowly tear
like a noose rounding tight
you'll gasp with realizing fear
slowly you'll see the light
life will be distant, not near
first your body, then your sight
this pain has no peer
it goes first from the right
feelings will numb and dissapear
then left, your in a deadly plight
and then you'll see my dear
nothing can save you, don't fight
and finaly things will be so clear

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damn eddie, das good.... o.o

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wow... nicee! good job!

Awesome poem :thumbup:

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I know you better than you think I do-don't
worry dear, this is why I fell in love with you.
The man in the looking glass, is looking back
at you at last. You can't hide from the truth
because the truth is all there is.
And the truth hurts because the truth is all there is.
I realized some time ago, that I would have to let you go...
- Handsome Boy Modeling School
*d-30

blah... its what evers... not as good as moon light's stuff, i still have much learning to do... my poems need work

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