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Posted by JeNyA on 09-27-2002 06:44 AM:

just a lil poem

" WiThUoT "
Without a love the kiss is lie
Without a hug the wishes r not disire
Without a miss the feeling is not real
& without u I have nothing to deal


The sky is blue & grass is green
The sun is gold - that is u bring.
Never ever let u go
& without me u couldn`t go.


Without a love the kiss is lie
Without a love all feelings rn`t inspire
Without all feelings I can`t live
& without me u can not breath.


The sky is blue & grass is green
The sun is gold - that is u bring.
I will never make u sad
& u will never cause me bad.


Posted by DEmeant0r on 09-27-2002 09:00 PM:

hey that's pretty good, keep it up

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Posted by saranghae on 09-28-2002 01:13 AM:

cute 'n sweet


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