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my OLD poem!!

i was all stressed about my ex and wanted to let me feelings out so i wrote this poem. this was like... a year or two ago~ i know it isnt all that good buh bear with me...

why

why is it every time i stand up, i fall back down?
why is it every time i want to smile, i just frown?
why am i so happy and laugh when you are glad?
why do i start to cry when i see that you are sad?
why are your arms the only place i want to lie?
why will i have to wait until the day i die?
why did all of our memories fly by so fast?
why did my dreams of happiness never last?
why can't you see that my feelings are so true?
why didn't i get the chance to say, "I Love You?"

-catherine sin...

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that....is...so...beyyyoootiful

hahah nice poem cathy

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"The weight of this sad time we must obey,/ Speak what we feel, not what we ought to say./ The oldest hath borne most; we that are young/ Shall never see so much, nor live so long."
King Lear (V.3.300-304)

-=sniff sniff=-

that was beautiful

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eh... here's my other one from another year ago... ish supposed to describe like... the times i met up with this dood i liked~ keke... obviously....

memories
the day we met, that saturday night
i hoped that things would be just right
waiting and waiting, standing in line
my first though~ he looks so fwione!
i looked into your eyes, and saw them shine
then i wished and hoped that u'd be mine

next time we met, it was a happy day for me
but when you were late, i wondered, "where could he be?"
sitting and standing, i waited for you
thinking about my wish that might come true.

the third day came by, when i saw you again
this time we went out with some of our friends
all i wanted was your endless love
though talking was somethin we didnt do much of
a hug but no kiss you gave to me that day
i wish there was more time so i could stay

the fourth time now that we have met
to risk my best friends trust, i have some regret.
a kiss i gave you on your cheek
as you stood there, unable to speak
these memories of you i cherish and adore
everyday that passes, makes me miss you more
you're all i think of 24/7 in my mind
and ill wait till the day you're by my side.

-catherine sin

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very very nice... :thumbup:

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eh... they're like... old~ haha! ill find my new one and type it up here

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so sweet.

i stink at writin poems

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wherever you go, whatever you do
i will be right here waiting for you
whatever it takes or how my heart breaks
i will be right here waiting for you

both are realli realli good ^^

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I Don't know what is wrong, what is right
It makes no difference, they are the same things...
I don't know what to believe in, whom i can trust
There was no way to see, no way to prove that
Why do I have to wonder and wonder?
I don't know why, I don't know why, I don't know why
I don't know who my friends are, who my enemies are
They love me some, they cheat me some in the same way
Why do I have to live with them, why do I love them?
I really wish I could believe in your sweet sweet lies
I close my eyes and tears are falling
I really wish I could live alone with no one at all
I close my heart and dreams are tumbling
Sing, sing a fool's song I am a king without a kingdom
LaLaLa, I am a mother without a womb for my children
LaLaLaLa, I am a lover without a lover
oh..I am a foolish clown of the world..
I am a foolish clown of the world...

So.. I don't know what to believe in, Whom to rely on...
-Jaurim

nice nice good job i enjoyed reading dem :D

thanks! keke

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its so good .. especiallie how u make it all rhyme.. shoot.. that takes sum skillz.. seriously.. :thumbup:

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haha... i just think of wah i want to say, put it into two lines with two rhyming words at the end, then see if it makes any sense~ keke!

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those are very nicely written :thumbup: i liked em