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My lil Poem

Yeah, today we had a math assessment. After i finished I decided to write a poem. Itz a bit corney.... but that is what i had after 20 minutes:



The day I met you
I couldn't forget you.
I just couldn't wait
for our first date.
As we hun out at the mall
I saw just you, that was all.
Not a movie or a show,
just your skin as white as snow.
And even today
my thoughts stray
to the day
I met you.

You're not jus my lover,
you're also my friend.
You're the one in whom I depend
I can confide in you
'cause I know you'll be true.
Nothing anybody can do
to stop me from loving you.

Perhaps there'll be a day
one our love fades away.
But you'll always stay
in my heart I pray.
I thank the good Lord for
having you, for rich or poor
I'll be with you.

Someday maybe
we can get married.
Have kids and a home
where I will write you a new poem.
But until then, I'll be in your arms
being protected from harm.
Just as long as you and I can stay true
there;s nothin we can't do.

While I write this poem, there is no girl, with white skin or whom will marry me. but someday... someday...

its not corny at all, the girls in my school would fall in love with you after they heard that.

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Props To Huby

wow. im impressed.

mmm... corny. please pass the butter.

good poem :thumbup:

*tears welling up* awwww! thaz soooo sweet! *sniff* dayam i wish sum1 wud do that for me