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"My Dream"

This poem ios abpout a dream i had one night...it felt so real....
-=shudders=- like all my poems, its pretty ghetto and old...but yeh...here it is


"My Dream"

Even from the beginning, during my birth,
I was cursed to be a rebel,
Bringing hell on earth,
Being more evil then the devil,

Causing chaos and pain,
Destroying everything in sight,
I have this world bound in chains,
In all this destruction i delight,

Bringing all my enemies down one by one,
Everyones still out to get me,
But unknown to them, i have already won,
They will never be free,

My wrath will follow them until their death,
No one will survive,
All through just one breath,
Not even one will stay alive.

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wow... really nice ^^ very powerful

must've been a really scary dream

spooky... nice stuff though =]

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Originally posted by TyGer STyLe
spooky... nice stuff though =]

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hah! aiggo .. sorry!!

yea. that must've been one heck of a dream ...

dayam .. did you really see yourself causing and wreaking havoc among everything???

wonder what triggered you to have that kind of a dream ??

pretty angsty stuff ... vent it out!

good stuff ..

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Originally posted by iTsmeehLita
hah! aiggo .. sorry!!

yea. that must've been one heck of a dream ...

dayam .. did you really see yourself causing and wreaking havoc among everything???

wonder what triggered you to have that kind of a dream ??

pretty angsty stuff ... vent it out!

good stuff ..

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wow. i wish i could have dreams like that. the only dreams i get is me falling down and then i wake up . that would be cool if you illustrated that, its hard i know, i suck at drawing. But what the hell just my thoughts.

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wow thats sucha scary dream wish you could sleep peacefully dongsang!! but wow i like how you just emphasized your ideas and feelings onto this poem.what a piece of art!!

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