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Speech pls help
heres my lil speech if u find any mistakes or weird wording or weird transitions pls tell me.. and o yea i need a better ending...and also what should i do to calm my nerves when i speck??
(if i posted this in the wrong forum then just change it)
As you may or may not know my name is Max Lai. Since most of you don't know me very well, here is the basic layout of my past and present.
I am a sophomore at South Hills High School and I have been at this school since my freshmen year. During the summer between my 8th grade and my freshmen year, I began swimming competitively for the Industry Hills Aquatic Center. Being a competitive swimmer urged me to tryout for the South Hills swim team. My experience in the summertime and during the school year at Industry Hills really paid off because I ended up being one of the few freshmen on the Varsity team.
Before a swim meet I’ll eat my favorite food. Which is pizza because it has all the food groups in it and it gives me energy the next day to swim hard. Swimming, in my opinion, is a very good for endurance and cardiovascular activity. When I swim, I always put 100% effort into it, whether it is for fun or competition. The best feeling is when you have all of your family and friends cheering you along, stroke by stroke. When the atmosphere begins to grow tenser and I see there is a challenge, I am always up for it.
My family and my friends are the most important people in my life because they make me happy when I’m feeling down and they make up what I am today. When I’m out there swimming I always keep in mind of this quote by Anon, he said, “Winners never quit and quitters never win”. To me this quote pushes me to do harder and harder on anything I do. It reminds me to never quit because at the end it’s worth all the hard work I did. I believe that everyone in this world, no matter who they are, they make a difference in this world.
Doing what I like the most, swimming made me want to join a water polo team and some day hopefully in the future, I will be able to teach children what I love best, to swim. Drawing has also become one of my favorite hobbies. Whenever I feel bored, I take out some white paper and a pencil and draw whatever comes to mind. Since I like drawing in the future I’m hoping to be a car designer.
I hope this speech tells you a little something about me and I hoped you enjoyed it.
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what are you trying to acheive with this speech?
newaiz besides the point... try this for an ending...
With drawing as my hobby, being a designer is my aspiration. I wish to design cars as a possible pursuit as my life's career. Even though i aspire to be a designer, i will never to lose sight of my first love of swimming, because (your reason). With this in mind i hope i have given you a little taste of who i really am, and what i love to do. Thank you for your time and attention... (don't forget to )
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moved to homework help
note: school help basically..im sure if this was in there someone can help you..
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Re: Speech pls help
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Originally posted by Azn2296
1) As you may or may not know my name is Max Lai. Since most of you don't know me very well, here is the basic layout of my past and present.
2) I am a sophomore at South Hills High School and I have been at this school since my freshmen year. During the summer between my 8th grade and my freshmen year, I began swimming competitively for the Industry Hills Aquatic Center. Being a competitive swimmer urged me to tryout for the South Hills swim team. My experience in the summertime and during the school year at Industry Hills really paid off because I ended up being one of the few freshmen on the Varsity team.
3) Before a swim meet I’ll eat my favorite food. Which is pizza because it has all the food groups in it and it gives me energy the next day to swim hard. Swimming, in my opinion, is a very good for endurance and cardiovascular activity. When I swim, I always put 100% effort into it, whether it is for fun or competition. The best feeling is when you have all of your family and friends cheering you along, stroke by stroke. When the atmosphere begins to grow tenser and I see there is a challenge, I am always up for it.
4) My family and my friends are the most important people in my life because they make me happy when I’m feeling down and they make up what I am today. When I’m out there swimming I always keep in mind of this quote by Anon, he said, “Winners never quit and quitters never win”. To me this quote pushes me to do harder and harder on anything I do. It reminds me to never quit because at the end it’s worth all the hard work I did. I believe that everyone in this world, no matter who they are, they make a difference in this world.
5) Doing what I like the most, swimming made me want to join a water polo team and some day hopefully in the future, I will be able to teach children what I love best, to swim. Drawing has also become one of my favorite hobbies. Whenever I feel bored, I take out some white paper and a pencil and draw whatever comes to mind. Since I like drawing in the future I’m hoping to be a car designer.
6) I hope this speech tells you a little something about me and I hoped you enjoyed it.
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"The weight of this sad time we must obey,/ Speak what we feel, not what we ought to say./ The oldest hath borne most; we that are young/ Shall never see so much, nor live so long."
King Lear (V.3.300-304)
whoaaaaa......thats some long advice....that changes nearly the whole essay.... :omg:
but....i dont do too well in english....
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u should seriously be an english teacher or something Crazydeb8ter
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wow ur good i lerned something today ... and that thingy that i posted it was corrected by 3 people and revised too. and then there still a lot of crappy shit in it... ur ever better then my teachers in grading theses things....u should be an englih teacher
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