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Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 04-26-2003 10:27 PM:

Unhappy My Life.....

I admired you from afar

Being where you always are

But a thought ran across my mind

I knew you could never be mine



Even still I watched you smile

My heart turning cold and defiled

But when I saw your crystal eyes

It was then I realized



I’d love you forever until I die

This I’m telling you is not a lie

So I watched you now with wonder and passion

Walking slowly in a heavenly fashion



For many nights I’ve cried to sleep

Knowing your heart I couldn’t keep

But it was then I finally knew

I’d give my life to be with you

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"Fear less, hope more;
Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."


-Sweedish Proverb


aim: MaGiKToToRo
xanga: MaGiKToToRo


Posted by saranghae on 04-26-2003 11:40 PM:

wahh.. that's really niceee!

i can really feel it ^^* noe wut u mean too =/

that's really sweet!!-- yet sad.


Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 04-27-2003 01:36 AM:

Thanx for reading

: ) Glad that u liked it....... yeah, i was pretty sad when i wrote it....


Posted by Chinesegrl on 04-27-2003 02:03 AM:

aww i know what you mean.. that was really good ^o^ keep writin for us to read ^o^


Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 04-27-2003 02:05 AM:

: )

__________________
"Fear less, hope more;
Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."


-Sweedish Proverb


aim: MaGiKToToRo
xanga: MaGiKToToRo


Posted by AZN Pinoy BOI on 04-27-2003 02:19 AM:

hehe aaron gettin da girlz wid hiz smooth poemz

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Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 04-27-2003 02:28 AM:

ahh... i brought this thread back from the dead cause it kind of describes the way im feeling now

__________________
"Fear less, hope more;
Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."


-Sweedish Proverb


aim: MaGiKToToRo
xanga: MaGiKToToRo


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