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STANDING ON THE STREET CORNER.

don't turn around.
look foward.
eyes closing.
must keep open.
overcoming.
what is that light?
pay attention damn it.
don't turn around.
overcoming.
eyes closed.
must open.
too late.
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can't think straight.
laughing.
who's sitting next to me?
stay focused.
blurred lights.
wretching.
who's sitting next to me?
laughing, coughing.
dizzy.
blurred lights.
what's that noise?
can't think straight.
can't go straight.
stay focused!
who's sitting next to me?
blinking blurred lights.
STOP!
too late.
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Look.
what's wrong with it?
i don't know.
Look over there.
what's wrong with that one?
i don't know.
oh my gosh.
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if only...
if only...
too late.


- man i am bored. i should be packing for new york. doing the laundry... doing homework... cleaning my room...cleaning my car... but i am sitting in front of the computer. heh ^_^. don't laugh at that (up there ^) -

haha nice! i liked it... its nice simple... and it conveys some kind of strange feeling in me... kinda makes me unconfortable when i read it... good stuff!!! you should write more!!! how come i never see any of your writing!

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Enter My Head!

wow~ niceee

yup.. i agree.. its nicee and simple