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Poem Competition #2
OK this time it's the "best rhyming" poem, ok? you have a week to do so, then on the last day, you can all vote, that's if there's more than one submitter...
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gj on making a broad topic
i hope you know a lot of poems dont rhyme
whats the topic on these poems dood.
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You can write about anything but it has to rhyme
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deng i should have made something like this...
except.....i don't think writing a poem should be a contest... i wouldn't want to judge and rank people's work in that way... ya know what i mean? i mean there is a difference between "roses are red violets are blue" and robert frost's work...
and yea... not all poems have to rhyme.... a lot of really good ones don't.... why put restrictions like that.... poems are supposed to express emotion... in whatever way it comes out....
just saying ...... ^_^ (V)
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so when is the last day? anybody submit yet?
last day is 12th, come on all just submit a friggin' poem
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haha the deadline is today, and no-one submitted
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ah haha here's a stupid one made in like a half a minute
this sharpie pen sure does smell
its killing my only brain cell
i was trying to walk but i fell
then i cracked like a little shell
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my poem
my poems dont like to rhyme
they like to take their time
takes special care to grow
my poems might not mean anything
but at least they're not nothing
and maybe you'll hear it flow
my poems are ongoing sentences
with methaphoric substances
but im probably just kidding
my poems make me laugh
cuz this is my first draft
and i can't find words that fit in
my poems are retarded
but at least with this i started
in a contest that no one really favors
my poem's about to end
so wont you be my friend?
i ask you.....wont you be my neighbor?
d=)
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haha cool two people submitted, I'll make a voting poll in a new topic...
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unstuck
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