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"A Place"

wrote this in 5 minutes after school, wwas feelin sad? i guess, and so i started writing. here it is, ma newest poem.

"A Place"

Is there a place in this world where i can go,
A place where i can be at ease, a place to rest my soul,
Away from all the pain and stress that life brings,
Somewhere i can go to just forget about everything,
A place where sorrow and hurt do not exist,
A place where evil can never persist,
Somewhere I can reside in harmony and peace,
To get away and escape all of this grief,
But such a place only exists in my dreams,
My misery will last for eternity, or so it seems.


hollaback

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that was good! yet it was sad... >_<

Re: "A Place"

hehe...a place.......
where should i go?...;
uhh..^^ anywayz...^^
it's sad..^^v..

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that was reallie goOd~ i liked it, nice wOrk heHe

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Re: Re: "A Place"

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Originally posted by yubeenie
hehe...a place.......
where should i go?...;
uhh..^^ anywayz...^^
it's sad..^^v..

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wow thats really good
yea i wish there was a place like that.

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