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Poem Competition

OK here's how it'll go, whoever writes the best love poem shall be named the winner, you have 1 week to do so which is until next Wednesday, I shall announce the winner then. Anyone can enter, so what are you waiting for? Start writing!
[EDIT] Oh yeah I forgot to tell yee'z how to send the poem to me: thru pm or email[/EDIT]

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Website: http://www.demeant0r.com
Contacts: email: davidyip@oceanfree.net

but people can also get the poem from the internet and call it theirs...

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immagijibae: seons a hoeeeeeee, he wears them g-strings, and i also knowwwww, they hurt his dinga-lings~ la l alalala~ nanannan~ oh~ seons a hoeeeeee, he wears them g-strings..............
immagijibae: liiiiiiiiiiiiiike my new 1-minute-made-up song???????

but ppl in dis forum ar nice...they ownt cheat..
but hes right some ppl might...

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hello..people :thumbup:
hab a nice day

aim: krNx kiD xP

If they do, I hope their conscience will get to them and make him/her tell me they didn't make the poem

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Contacts: email: davidyip@oceanfree.net

y dont we post it up instead of sending it so people can read it?

that could work too

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good idea demeantor..hopefully people will post some of their writings..

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Recongizable

Submitted poem

And we have our first submitted poem, by rYcePuFf
It's untitled:

the first time i saw you was in class
where you were introducing yourself to me
we were just strangers, so i thought...
thought it was nothing

the second time i saw you was online
where i was wondering when you'd talk to me again
we were friends for awhile, i guessed...
guessed that it didn't really matter

the third time i saw you was after school
where you asked me over prettier girls to be your date
i had been waiting for you, i almost...
almost gave up

the forth time i saw you was at her house
where you were so focused on her perfect smile
that was the first night that i cried...
cried over you

the fifth time i saw you was at my door
where you were the one crying
seeing you like that, i realized...
realized that you still loved me

the sixth time i saw you was at the altar
where you were staring into the sparkling eyes of your bride
but it wasnt me, so i walked...
walked out of your life

the seventh time i saw you was at the cemetery
where you still looked like the man i loved
your days were stolen from you, even more i missed...
missed the times when you held me

the last time i saw you was in my dreams
where you were telling me how beautiful i was
but as much as i wanted to, somehow, i just couldnt...
couldnt believe you......

Come on people submit more, there's only until Wednesday, get writing.

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Contacts: email: davidyip@oceanfree.net

hm... no one else submitting...? ^^;

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gg rycepuff wins

If no-one else submits by wednesday rYcePuFf wins

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Jeez, no-one else submitted... you can now celebrate rYcEPuFf for you are the only submitter and winner of this competition

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-_-;; emm.. yay? er.. yay!

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