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Posted by Hyesungu on 08-09-2003 08:35 PM:

Goodbye

As I sit here all alone
Thinking of what we once had
I can feel my tears fall
Because I'm just so sad
I really thought you were
My one true destiny
That is until you said those words
That you no longer loved me
So you left me behind
Saying a short goodbye
And slowly walked away
As I started to cry
Knowing now that its truly over
My heart destroyed in an istant
I feel as though I will never love again..


Dont ever take love for granted..


Posted by MellowYellow on 08-09-2003 11:07 PM:

hmm, brooding. don't be so down. I suppose it serves as inspiration? Sorry i guess it's not necessarily a good time to mention that.... unless it's not from true experience. If it is, sorry for your loss.


Posted by Hyesungu on 08-10-2003 12:16 AM:

thank you. It is from true experience. I just have to pull myself together and try to move on. How hard thats going to be? I have no idea..


Posted by craziistarz on 08-11-2003 07:44 AM:

did you and yur girl.. break up?

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Posted by Hyesungu on 08-11-2003 08:06 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by craziistarz
did you and yur girl.. break up?


unfortunately we did...


Posted by MasWusHot on 08-11-2003 09:19 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by Hyesungu
unfortunately we did...

aww thats too bad , thats a really nice poem, sry to hear u broke up

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Posted by craziistarz on 08-12-2003 12:48 AM:

quote:
Originally posted by Hyesungu
unfortunately we did...


eeeek i'm so sorry.. =*(

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Posted by kiggaplease on 08-12-2003 03:05 AM:

sorry to hear that, man

I take back what I said about you giving me her digits


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