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Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 05-16-2003 12:49 AM:

Gone forever.....

Not really as good is my other ones..... but i still liked it

For so long we were together
Making our lives turn for the better
When you laugh angels cry
When your sad my heart just dies

Watching you in pain is too much to see
I'll protect you with all of me
All our problems we saw through
I'll be together forever with you

Did god laugh at me that fatefull day?
Where I saw your body lay
I tried many times to save your life
But you just had to leave my side

Even in death love grows strong
I'll never forget your eternal song
Later on we'll be together
But for now your gone forever

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Posted by AZN Pinoy BOI on 05-16-2003 01:02 AM:

still nice aaron... thats wut u were talkng about after school heh heh... think it's sweet

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Posted by kryogenix on 05-16-2003 07:46 PM:

aaron the poet!!!


Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 05-16-2003 08:54 PM:

hahaha..... yeah

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Posted by LuvSunghoonie on 01-18-2004 02:49 AM:

nice.. I love your poems!

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