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Posted by merdawg on 03-23-2003 07:36 PM:

My Song Is Here!!!!!!

http://jusunlee.com/forums/showthre...;threadid=11392

that links to the lyrics

this here goes to the song:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/merdawgmusic.htm

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Posted by MasWusHot on 03-23-2003 07:45 PM:

WoO HoO u recorded it~!! I like it a lot, the beat is nice and u sound goOd ..nice work!!

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Posted by J-DraGoNz on 03-23-2003 09:33 PM:

original songs belong in lyricism - moved

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Posted by Chinesegrl on 03-23-2003 09:38 PM:

oOo this is great! ^_^; nice voice hehe ^_^ haha lovin the beat

Posted by J-DraGoNz on 03-23-2003 09:45 PM:

nice song, i liked the lyrics. is this an OG beat? i like the vocals in the backround. that beat kinda bugs after a while, the melody. you have like no emotion, you sound way too monotone. a few parts in the song were really loud compared to the rest of the song. But great song. i like

Beat: B-
Lyrics: A
Delivery: C
Hook/Chorus: B
Production: B+

Overall: B

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Posted by merdawg on 03-23-2003 10:19 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
nice song, i liked the lyrics. is this an OG beat? i like the vocals in the backround. that beat kinda bugs after a while, the melody. you have like no emotion, you sound way too monotone. a few parts in the song were really loud compared to the rest of the song. But great song. i like

Beat: B-
Lyrics: A
Delivery: C
Hook/Chorus: B
Production: B+

Overall: B

lol...thanx for the rating. the parts that were louder were suppose to be louder. and if u notice, they were the parts that were important.[well to me they were]. and the monotone part, thats how i am. [very mellow]. and beat buggin, really? ok.

Posted by J-DraGoNz on 03-23-2003 10:20 PM:

actually, beat doesnt bug too much. its just how i am i guess =/. and if i might add, this song is MUCH MUCH better then my first track about the girl i like~

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Posted by * Liah * on 03-23-2003 11:19 PM:

Omo.. wow this is your song...? It's mad good.. whoa.. how do you do that!?!?

Posted by niggoreanboi on 03-23-2003 11:26 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by J-DraGoNz
original songs belong in lyricism - moved

why does it? for lyricism you should add a section for audio battle or something or something so you can put original music in it.

coo track nice job

Posted by J-DraGoNz on 03-23-2003 11:33 PM:

quote:
Originally posted by niggoreanboi
why does it? for lyricism you should add a section for audio battle or something or something so you can put original music in it.

coo track nice job

jusun wont allow me to ahve another subforum in lyricism