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Brothers...

there won't be a day that i won't pray
it'll be there in my heart night and day
you'll have a special place in my conversation
through the difficulties and elation
and i know you'll have me there too
for there aren't many people like you
you always managed to make me smile
and for that i'll be sure to travel those miles
friends aren't hard to come by
but those drift and away they fly
brothers stick through
and those, there are but a few
and we're bound by the blood
brought up from the same mud
and they find their way again
to each other their feelings never feigned
for brothers aren't just two
and its just what brothers do...

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Enter My Head!

that was really short and sweet ..

i really like how the words flowed in the beginning the most ..

good job!

i like that poem.
wish i could be dat tight wit my bros. haven talked to them for almos a year now.

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thats nice...i wish i had like an older brother

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"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. " - Bruce Lee

thats very good writing man

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Originally posted by merdawg
thats nice...i wish i had like an older brother

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yes! i love these short writings and it's good ^_^ good job! keep on writin man