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freestylzz bout war

//Its been a little while,
//But bet we still at war.
//Turn on the tube,
//And go check the score-
//Two thousand to four.
//Iraq in the lead
//But then comes the chore
//Of looking again
//Findin out
//That’s the death of men.

//The side we choose.
//Just based on food.
//Oil and booze.
//Never thinking ahead,
//Of what we can lose.
//The lives, the sanity-
//Supposed humanity
//Now I see
//A War for American vanity.

//Propaganda
//Pamphlets and a
//Couple a hundred bombs
//To drop
//On babies n moms
//Don’t stop
//They might surrender
//Send us a message
//Nope
//Return to senda
//Just continue with the plan a
//Shock and awe
//Cause we already saw
//How much of a flaw
//One nation under-

//Godamn think for yourself
//Don’t follow the crowd
//Quit playin games
//Stop bein so proud
//Still so much shroud
//Waitin to be broke
//Soon it will lift
//Then comes the quest
//To convince the rest
//Why by taking thousands of lives
//It was all for the best.


note: by the way i dont really have strong feelings either way about this but i just get to be the ultimate freestyler when im in the shower so i thought this up. '='

this is really good. keep posting, youve got some talent

it was good.... but some parts don't flow well, good subject to do it on

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Originally posted by AZN Pinoy BOI
it was good.... but some parts don't flow well, good subject to do it on

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"Love is like a friendship caught on fire. In the beginning a flame, very pretty, often hot and fierce, but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and our love becomes as coals, deep-burning and unquenchable. " - Bruce Lee

wow you flow really well ...and it means a lot too

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markers up the nose is the way to go!

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Originally posted by merdawg
to me it flowed nicely. good job kevin. iunno wat ted is talking about

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