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my stupid rap.

dont laugh cuz this is my first time. hehe

you think your tyte/
thinking you can fight/
alright then lets go outside!/
show me wat your made of/
show me your tough/
thought you was gonna do shit to me/
i aint that rough/
try harder cuz you aint trying hard enough/
probably knows you cant do better than a dove/
i know my lyrics are wak/
but not as bad as the one you gonna spit back/
just admit you were wrong/
this aint gonna last for long/
so step down son/
before you run crying to your mom/

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oh yah can you guys do me a favor? can you give me some tips on how i can improve? hehehe

Re: my stupid rap.

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Originally posted by MiGhTy KiTTy
i know my lyrics are wak/
but you dont gotta say its quack/

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sHIET happens.. then u move ON

.. so..mean...hehe jp. thanks for the new line.

quote:

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Originally posted by MiGhTy KiTTy
.. so..mean...hehe jp. thanks for the new line.

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__________________
sHIET happens.. then u move ON

Re: my stupid rap.

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Originally posted by MiGhTy KiTTy




i know my lyrics are wak/

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im sorry but it sux ^^

j/p j/p