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Posted by MaGiKToToRo on 01-16-2004 07:56 PM:

Love you forever

I admired u from afar
Being where u always are
but a thought ran across my mind
I knew you could never be mine

Even still I watched you smile
my heart turning cold and defiled
But it was when i saw ur crystal eyes
it was then I realized

I'd love you forever until i die
This im telling you is not a lie
So i watched you now with wonder and passion
walking slowly in a heavanly fassion

Many nights ive cried to sleep
Knowing your heart i couldn't keep
But it was then i finally new
I'd give my life to be with you

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Whine less, breathe more;
Talk less, say more;
Hate less, love more;
And all good things are yours."


-Sweedish Proverb


aim: MaGiKToToRo
xanga: MaGiKToToRo


Posted by LuvSunghoonie on 01-18-2004 02:45 AM:

Omg, thats so powerful
I felt like that before..
actually I feel like that now too..

may I ask, what inspired you to write this poem?

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